Thursday, August 01, 2013

Mini Golf In Taupo

Mini Golf In Taupo  
WHACK, as I hit the ball with my stick. ‘ Hole in one’ I yell out to my family.  ‘Your turn uncle Hayden try beat that. ‘oh no’ my uncle Hayden said I didn't get a hole in one.  there is 1-18 holes that you have to go to.  The last one had a cave that your ball had to go through.  I gave my aunty Tt a turn on the last hole she hit the ball so hard all we could hear at that moment was SMACK,the ball had gone over the ledge into the garden and then splash in the pond it goes,and who has to get it me.  I was all wet on the sleeve so we gave the lady at the counter the stick and our balls got in the car,went home for lunch.

4 comments:

  1. Very cool why did your aunty hit the ball so hard?
    I like the ending well done.
    Alexandra

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  2. Awesome your Aunty could have hit someone in the head. Does she know that it is not world wide golf.

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  3. Wow Crystal that was amazing!
    I like ho you started in the action!
    You need to work on your grammar.

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  4. Wow Crystal that was amazing!
    I like the way you started in the action!
    I think you need to work on your grammar.

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