Wednesday, May 07, 2014

Horse On The Beach

WALT describe using the 5 senses                  look = Pink
  • look                                                                Hear = Green
  • hear                                                                taste = Purple
  • taste                                                               smell = Red
  • smell                                               Feel or touch = Blue
  • feel or touch


My scene: Horse On The Beach




As I gallop across the beach with the hot hot sun directly on my hairy body.   I can hear my little foal running behind me. As I’m galloping across the beautiful sea I can smell burgers,hot dogs,and sausage rolls. I look behind me to see if my foal was still there. Oh no I can’t see her BUT WAIT.. oh  that cheeky little munchkin got in front of me. And then all of a sudden she slowed down and went back behind me. She must of known that I got angry so she decided to go back behind me again.So we carred on cantering and then our owner yelled out our names COCO wich is me and WILLOW wich is my foal. Then she led us to the horse float and fed as an apple each mmmm that tastes so yum. So In the end it was a great day.
                                            The End
                                         By Crystal

3 comments:

  1. Great work Crystal!
    I really like the way you did different colours for your senses.
    Well done!

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  2. Good story Crystal.
    I like how you colour coded you senses and It was a great story.
    Well done.

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  3. What a cool story babe, im so proud of ya xxx

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