Wednesday, April 09, 2014

Noodle Tag

Writing Purpose: To Entertain
Type of writing: moment in time

WALT use our senses to describe

  • (see, hear, smell, feel, taste)
  • different sentence starters / some short sentences
  • action verbs (crash / crashing, scratches / scratch / scratching, smack / smacks / smacking bounce / bouncing, sprint / sprints / sprinting, dodge / dodges / dodging)
  • present tense (I am, he is, we are)

                       Noodle Tag

Suddenly Kory yells out “C for cat” oh ho I am soooo nervous that is the first letter of my name. As I start to run,I realise that I am half way there but I spoke too soon,WACK oh no,well thats me out. Better luck next time. As I stood there I got an idea. What if I creep around the taggers but if they see me I could start Sprinting to the end. After Kory said like 6 letters he yelled out “everybody go”. I Sticked with my plan and I started to creep around the taggers. Kayla must of got the same idea because she began  to do the same thing as me. I think someone soar me so you know what I did, I started to sprint go go go I keep repeating in my head. There is a tagger at the end,oh oh  I say in my head. So I start to run even faster. Woooo one of the taggers try to whack me on the leg but I leaped in the air as high as I could.

How To Play Noodle Tag:

First you pick your taggers. Then you give the taggers a noddle each.
Now what I mean by noddle is a pool noodle the ones that you float on.
Then the taggers find a space that they're comfortable in.
They yell out a letter like C for cat then if you have C in your first or last
name then you half to run. If you make it then yay.
And if you get tagged you half to stand on the spot
And wait for someone thats running to come and
tag you so you can carry on running.
                                         I hope these rules have been helpful to you

By Crystal.

3 comments:

  1. that is awesome Crystal.
    I like the way that you used a lot of describing words.

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  2. Great writing, Crystal. I love how you have included instructions with your exciting moment in time. You are writing like a reader and reading like a writer!

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  3. Awesome Crystal.
    Like how you have put in how to play noodle.
    It probable will come in handy to me sometime.

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